tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8820541781055558345.post5913975203192032005..comments2017-02-20T21:50:08.942-06:00Comments on Irly Scribblings of David J Hartung: Caesar the Troll Part 24David J Hartunghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10027709208881295551noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8820541781055558345.post-47725656297350506742013-01-13T13:12:53.728-06:002013-01-13T13:12:53.728-06:00Good description of the captain of the enemy . I ...Good description of the captain of the enemy . I have still not caught on to the thing that the King gave the girl , the only thing that could protect her .Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13274929147261755369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8820541781055558345.post-69464622427156817522012-07-11T14:52:00.964-05:002012-07-11T14:52:00.964-05:00I almost ended the story today, but I think it wil...I almost ended the story today, but I think it will be one or two more days before the ending. I was afraid my style might be twisting, but the ending demands it. Thanks for commenting! I am glad to know it feels climactic.David J Hartunghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10027709208881295551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8820541781055558345.post-10900126229423148092012-07-11T13:06:48.960-05:002012-07-11T13:06:48.960-05:00Fantastic emotional and physical climax. I'm ...Fantastic emotional and physical climax. I'm getting a very cool image of the head bad guy's imposing appearance... nice description.Road to Grinnellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11882179150281852324noreply@blogger.com